sábado, 12 de julho de 2014

More one writted story.

Now, the story in english,

Em baixo, em português.

The Perfume.

EMILIA is sitting on the couch, EMILIA hear the noise of breaking glass. EMILIA goes to his room and sees DANIELA and broken glass on the floor next to a liquid.

EMILIA

Daniela, this is my favorite perfume.

DANIELA

I´m sorry.

EMILIA goes into the kitchen, grabs a pie and throws in DANIELA face.

EMILIA

For you learn.

DANIELA

I cannot believe you did that.

EMILIA

And you will pay.

DANIELA

I do not believe, my friendship is worth less than that damn perfume.

EMILIA

Sorry, I do this without thinking.

DANIELA

What you did was wrong, want to punish me for such a thing, nor was my fault.

EMILIA

You are right. You can throw me three pies.

DANIELA

If I do that, I would simply excusing you, but not quite.

EMILIA

Sorry.

CAMILA enters the room.

DANIELA

And who overthrew the perfume was this idiot here that neither had the courage to stand to take the blame.

CAMILA

Sorry.

EMILIA

I mean it was her and not you?

CAMILA

Excuse me, I was afraid you'd fight me, so I asked her to tell you.

EMILIA

How ridiculous.

DANIELA

But okay, just throw a pie in it and is resolved.

EMILIA

I cannot, it's not right to humiliate someone for something she did not mean to.

DANIELA

Oh, just the idiot here gets screwed.

EMILIA

Sorry.

DANIELA grabs a pie and goes up CAMILA. EMILIA take DANIELA back.

EMILIA

Stop it.

DANIELA

Not is right I only give me bad  if I was the only one brave..

CAMILA takes the pie of DANIELA hand and throws in her.

EMILIA

Why did you do that?

CAMILA

It was her or me.

EMILIA

So that makes sense.

DANIELA

Let me go.

EMILIA leave DANIELA.

EMILIA

But you can stop saw, I will not tolerate any injustice in my house.

DANIELA

Only after I screwed up.

CAMILA goes to DANIELA.

CAMILA

You want to get back at me?

DANIELA

Would be right.

CAMILA throw two pies in DANIELA.

CAMILA

This is by having vengeful thoughts.

DANIELA

Emilia looks it.

EMILIA (yelling from the bathroom)

I saw nothing, I'm in the bathroom.

DANIELA

Damn.

CAMILA goes to DANIELA holding a pie.

DANIELA

Stop.

CAMILA

Calm down you crazy, this pie is strange.

DANIELA

Let me see.

DANIELA approaching the face of the pie to look. CAMILA slams pie in face DANIELA.

CAMILA

I cannot believe you fell for that.

DANIELA

This is so old, I did not think you were doing.

CAMILA

Lie, you fell because an idiot.

EMILIA go to DANIELA up with a pie.

EMILIA

I saw what she did was not right, you see that pie so beautiful?

DANIELA

I'm seeing.

EMILIA

You pick up and ...

EMILIA slams pie in face DANIELA.

DANIELA

Why did you do that? You are not the righteous owner?

EMILIA

I know, but I thought it was so cool that I had to do also, luckily has an imbecile girl who falls in all.

DANIELA

I'm leaving.

EMILIA

Calm, be the victim again.

DANIELA

I'm tired.

CAMILA come from one side and Emilia to the other, each holding a pie. CAMILA will throw the pie in DANIELA but DANIELA stoops. DANIELA wait a bit and when she gets up, hits the CAMILA the face and scrub until leaving the clean plate.

CAMILA

You almost made me hit the Emilia.

EMILIA

Lucky that it did not, I'd put you out kicking if this had happened.

DANIELA

Sorry friend.

EMILIA

Apologize, but is quietly while I hit you with one more pie.

EMILIA will throw the pie, DANIELA stoops, EMILIA ducks and hits a pie in the face DANIELA.

EMILIA

You are risking girl, beware.

CAMILA

As punishment, let's throw more pies her until she no longer hold.

EMILIA

Good idea.


EMILIA and CAMILA put DANIELA in the corner on the wall and each one throw two pies in her.

Mais uma história escrita.

Mais uma história escrita, espero que gostem.
Daqui a pouco eu posto em inglês.

More one writted story, hope you enjoy.
Pretty soon I'll post in English.


O Perfume

EMÍLIA está sentada no sofá, EMILIA ouve barulho de vidro quebrando. EMILIA vai até o seu quarto e vê DANIELA parada e vidro quebrado no chão junto a um liquido.

EMILIA

Daniela, esse é meu perfume preferido.

DANIELA

Desculpa.

EMILIA vai até a cozinha, pega uma torta e atira no rosto de DANIELA.

EMILIA

Para você aprender.

DANIELA

Não acredito que você fez isso.

EMILIA

E você vai pagar.

DANIELA

Eu não acredito, a minha amizade vale menos que essa droga de perfume.

EMILIA

Desculpa, eu agi sem pensar.

DANIELA

Isso que você fez foi errado, querer me punir por uma coisa dessas, nem foi culpa minha.

EMILIA

Você tem razão amiga. Você pode me jogar até três tortas.

DANIELA
Se eu fizer isso, eu estaria simplesmente te desculpando, mas não é bem assim.

EMILIA

Desculpa.

CAMILA entra no quarto.

DANIELA

E quem derrubou o perfume foi essa idiota aqui que nem teve coragem de ficar para assumir a culpa.

CAMILA

Desculpa.

EMILIA

Quer dizer que foi ela e não você?

CAMILA

Desculpe-me, eu fiquei com medo que você fosse brigar comigo, então eu pedi para ela te contar.

EMILIA

Que ridículo.

DANIELA

Mas tudo bem, é só jogar uma torta nela e está resolvido.

EMILIA

Não posso, não é certo humilhar alguém por algo que ela fez sem querer.

DANIELA

Ah, só a trouxa aqui se ferra.

EMILIA

Paciência.

DANIELA pega uma torta e vai para cima de CAMILA. EMILIA segura DANIELA pelas costas.

EMILIA

Para com isso.

DANIELA

Não é certo só eu me ferrar se eu fui a única corajosa.
CAMILA pega a torta da mão de DANIELA e joga nela.

EMILIA

Por que você fez isso?

CAMILA

Era ela ou eu.

EMILIA

Até que faz sentido.

DANIELA

Me solta.

EMILIA solta DANIELA.

EMILIA

Mas você pode parar viu, não vou tolerar mais nenhuma injustiça na minha casa.

DANIELA

Só depois que eu me ferrei.

CAMILA vai até DANIELA.

CAMILA

Você quer se vingar de mim?

DANIELA

Seria o certo.

CAMILA joga duas tortas em DANIELA.

CAMILA

Isso é por ter pensamentos vingativos.

DANIELA

Emília olha isso.

EMILIA (gritando do banheiro)

Não vi nada, estou no banheiro.

DANIELA

Droga.

CAMILA vai até DANIELA segurando uma torta.

DANIELA

Pode parar.

CAMILA

Calma sua doida, essa torta está estranha.

DANIELA

Deixa-me ver.

DANIELA aproxima o rosto da torta para olhar. CAMILA bate com torta no rosto de DANIELA.

CAMILA

Não acredito que você caiu nessa.

DANIELA

Era tão manjada que eu não achei que você fosse fazer.

CAMILA

Mentira, você caiu porque é idiota.

EMILIA vai até DANIELA com uma torta.

EMILIA

Eu vi o que ela fez, não foi certo, está vendo essa torta tão bonita?

DANIELA

Estou vendo.

EMILIA

Você pega e...

EMILIA bate com a torta na cara de DANIELA.

DANIELA

Por que você fez isso? Você não é a dona justiceira?

 EMILIA

Eu sei, mas é que eu achei tão legal que eu tinha que fazer também, por sorte tem uma menina imbecil que cai em todas.

DANIELA

Eu vou embora.

EMILIA

Calma, cai em mais uma só.

DANIELA

Já cansei.

CAMILA vêm de um lado de DANIELA e EMILIA do outro, cada uma segura uma torta. CAMILA vai jogar a torta em DANIELA, mas DANIELA se abaixa. DANIELA espera um pouco e quando ela se levanta, CAMILA a acerta no rosto e esfrega até deixar o prato limpo.

CAMILA

Você quase me fez acertar a Emília.

EMILIA

Sorte que isso não aconteceu, eu ia te colocar para fora a pontapés se isso tivesse acontecido.

DANIELA

Desculpa amiga.

EMILIA

Desculpo, mas fica quietinha enquanto eu te acerto com mais uma torta.

EMILIA vai jogar a torta, DANIELA se abaixa, EMILIA se abaixa e acerta a torta na cara de DANIELA.

EMILIA

Você está se arriscando menina, toma cuidado.

CAMILA

Como punição, vamos jogar mais tortas nela até ela não aguentar mais.

EMILIA

Boa ideia.


EMILIA e CAMILA encurralam DANIELA na parede e cada uma joga duas tortas nela.

terça-feira, 8 de julho de 2014

Writted story.

Em baixo está a mesma história em português.

Story just written.
Good evening everyone.
I decided to post one writted story, is like one of the comics with few differences.
Enjoy.


Police.

EMILIA and CAMILA are walking together.

EMILIA

You passed the exam then?

CAMILA

It was easy, I'm super happy.

EMILIA

Cool, Daniela is already knowing.

CAMILA

You talked to her?

EMILIA

No, someone told her, do not know who.

CAMILA

Too bad, I wish I have told her.

EMILIA

She is at home now doing their favorite pie.

CAMILA

The strawberry?

EMILIA

That's the one.

CAMILA

Ah, was not to have told you, spoiled the surprise.

EMILIA

Sorry. Let's play a joke with Daniela?

CAMILA

Not like a lot of their jokes.

EMILIA

It will be funny, she will take the scare.

CAMILA

Better not, she's making my favorite dessert and I'll scare her, not cool.

EMILIA

Do not you love surprises? It will be a surprise.

CAMILA

Okay, but look there, huh?

EMILIA

Do so, you go there, sit on the couch and gets a face of as something horrible had happened to you.

CAMILA

So what?

EMILIA

The other part, you can leave me.

In CAMILA house.

DANIELA is preparing the pies, the bell rings, come CAMILA and EMILIA.

DANIELA

Congratulations Camila.

CAMILA passes, goes to the couch and sits CAMILA is crestfallen.

DANIELLE goes to CAMILA.

DANIELA

What´s up, girl?

CAMILA don´t say.

DANIELLE goes to EMILIA you're upset.

DANIELA

Emilia, will you tell me what happened?

EMILIA

I would rather not tell.

DANIELA

I was worried.

EMILIA

Never mind, better cancel the special dessert.

DANIELA

But they are ready.

EMILIA

I think she will not even get to eat.

DANIELA

Wow, is that bad?

EMILIA

Bad? You cannot imagine.

DANIELA

Tell me.

EMILIA

I was in my house when the police called there.

DANIELA

Police?

EMILIA

The police, they took Camila stealing.

DANIELA gets upset. CAMILA looks scared for EMILIA.

DANIELA

Stealing?

CAMILA

Hey, Emilia.

EMILIA (screaming)

Is still a thief.

CAMILA is startled.

EMILIA

Now I'm responsible for it.

DANIELA

I do not believe, cannot be true, I always trusted her.

CAMILA

Emilia.

EMÍLIA

Be quiet, you have no right to say anything.

DANIELA

Hard work I have.

EMILIA

Yes, but after all, it nonetheless has the merit of having passed the examination.

DANIELA

That is.

DANIELA grabs the pie and takes up CAMILA.

DANIELA

I did for you, though you do not deserve.

EMILIA goes up, puts his hand beneath the hand and makes CAMILA hit the face with a pie smeared all your face.

DANIELA

Normally I would find this very bad taste, but well she deserved.

DANIELA hug EMILIA.

DANIELA

Thank you, now I think it was worth making that pie.

EMILIA

Right. I'm going to the bakery to buy more pies, I guess it was not enough.

DANIELA

Arrives.

EMILIA

I'll be back.

EMILIA goes to the door.

DANIELA
So what you have to say for yourself, your offender?

EMÍLIA back with pies.

EMILIA enters the room with several pies. DANIELA and CAMILA and are looking for EMILIA.

EMILIA

You know she was going to lie to you.

EMILIA throws a pie in CAMILA hard.

DANIELA

I mean then that it was all a joke?

EMILIA

Lie.

DANIELA

And why you accepted, Camila?

CAMILA

She did not tell me the whole joke, I thought that it would not be such a thing.

EMILIA throw two pies in CAMILA face.

EMILIA

You know what we do with informers?

DANIELA

I think this coming as well, eh Emily?

EMILIA

It's not fair.

DANIELA gets a pie, is going to throw in the EMILIA, but she throw in CAMILA.

CAMILA

Why did you do that?

DANIELA

Oh, today I realized something, you're so cute, I even like to take you all smeared.

CAMILA

It's not fair.

DANIELA

Right, but you were too dizzy to fall for that, then you deserve a punishment.

CAMILA

And Emily, will leave unscathed?

DANIELA

Today yes.

CAMILA

It's not fair.

DANIELA
Because I felt sorry for you, and when I feel it, I will throw you in more pies. But we do so, you passed the test and we are very proud of you, so now you take pies in the face.

CAMILA

It's not fair, I was the biggest victim.

EMILIA take CAMILA back.

EMILIA

Be quiet, she knows what she is doing.

DANIELA grabs the pie and throws in CAMILA.

EMILIA

My turn.


EMILIA hit CAMILA, DANIELA handle CAMILA, EMILIA throw two pies in the face and scrub with strong.